Critique my new site?

[Olimpia]

But gently, please I'm proud of it, despite its shortcommings.

I am aware that there are a couple things that could be corrected, like awkward white spaces and the sample artwork that takes a while to pop up. I'm going to try to iron all that out later with my roommate, who did the coding.

I just need to know if it's clean and simple, easy to read (I adore the script font, but I get that not everyone might read cursive well), and all that type of stuff.

http://www.martinottireptiles.com

 

[Olimpia]

Come on, no one has any opinions?

I just need to know is the cursive font is too hard for everyone to read, because I'll have to change it as soon as possible.

 

[Syn]

The smaller cursive is a bit hard to read, I can squint and read it, though.

The colors are a nice contrast to the geckos you have on the front page. Very easy on the eyes.

I am a stickler for centered fonts, but that's your choice.

The arial font for descriptions seems plain to me.

I love your art! Keep up the great work!!!

 

[jessica]

I like it, but if just glancing at it the cursve makes it easy to over look the name of your company and the species.

 

[Courtney]

Dont repeat information in 2 locations. available section..., we have the opportunity to pay each animal plenty of individual care and attention......home page..... I am able to pay each animal thorough individual attention and provide it with a high quality of life and care.
you should make that statement a headline but word it differently that way its always in view..the cursive is beautiful leave it on the name but every where else change it.

 

[Olimpia]

Ok thanks, good points. I'll probably change the font then. I'm one of the few people anywhere that actually writes in cursive, so I'm used to it but I always forget that not everyone can make it out lol.

But everything is showing up correctly for everyone at least? Because between my roommate and I it varies, on mine it's all centered and fine but on his it leans towards one side lol.

 

[jessica]

Comes up centered on mine

 

[Syn]

I was on Internet Explorer and it was not centered. Now that I'm at home and on Firefox, it's fine.

 

[Olimpia]

That's so weird. On my computer, either on IE or on firefox it looks fine. But then on my roommate's Safari it looks off. We'll see how we can fix that.

 

[Syn]

I just checked on the IE on my computer... and it's fine. That's so weird!

 

[Olimpia]

I hate computers lol They can be so darn complicated sometimes!

Thanks for the imput so far guys, I'll change stuff around tonight or tomorrow.